"H" wants To Learn English
Hi,
Thank you.
I'm an iranian girl, I like to learn english well, one of my dear friends suggested that create a weblog and write in it. I created but I don't know other people like you kidding me or not. I want write in this weblog every day. if you have some time to read my texts and your english is good please help me to learn english.
Thank you. 
I think this is a very good idea! I am sure you can improve your English drastically by blogging. OK: A small correction:
WRONG: ..if you have some time to read my texts and your english is good please help me to learn english...
CORRECT: if you have some spare time to read my blog and your English is good, please help me improve my English.
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2-I am an Iranian girl.
3-I would like to learn English, or I am eager to learn ….
4-One of my dear friends suggested me that I would create….
5-I created it.
6-I don’t know whether other people will be kidding me or not?
7-I want to write…
8-Please help me to improve my English
9-Everybody (everyone) can see my essay (blog).
Finally, I think Advanced dictionary and Collocation dictionary of oxford are very helpful.
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